This was the first draft for my thriller, I uploaded it to you tube and then Asked members of my class for their initial thoughts on my opening. once they had time to think about what they thought i then asked for feedback, this was so that if there was anything that could be improved i would be able to go back and redo it. they also gave positive feedback and highlight what i did well, this was helpful as i could try and use the positives to improve on the negatives.
Potential Improvements
Re-film certain scenes with a camera stand
change the text used for "a Richard turner film" as it does not match the theme.
trim down video between 1:05 to 1:45 as there is a lot of unnecessary scenes that take up a lot of the video.
Aim to get the opening closer to the two minute mark.
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